Adventures as trash in Literary Horror group continue, as the most prolific crit dude tells me my story isn't a real story and things happen too quickly. At a hair over 600 words, I'm not sure how he expected it to go slowly.
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And like, I had a beginning, a middle and an end where a problem was introduced, there were feelings had about it, and it was resolved, so. Like, it's no Big Wangsty Feels About Fucking and Dysphoria That Go Nowhere at word limit, I know. I guess that's my problem.
