Oh, friends. It was pregnancy goo kink. Textbook. Goo kink.
All that body-horror descriptive power turned towards lavishing details on (transparent!) gummy women giving birth and I'm pretty sure he doesn't know how very pregnancy goo kink it is. It is Not That Sort of Group.
How in the world am I going to crit this without mentioning it? How am I going to maintain the "enthusiastic and encouraging" tone this group requires?
This is my luck with crit groups, I swear.