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I have received feedback on my story and it is nigh incomprehensible. I think he seems to be saying he'd like it better if it was in the Literary style he uses, but he could also just fancy himself a academic writing professor. I don't know. He might also be saying he wants it happier (weird, in short story space), and missed the part about it making sense at the end.
I don't know if this is better or worse than the bullying group who told me my stuff wasn't worth reading until it matched the way they wrote.