And here's an attempt that actually tries to be less messy; I think it might be getting better? I'm mostly unsure about the bottom.
@Chel I really am too. I like it a lot better than my old title screen and it's definitely more feminine which is very important.
@NovaSquirrel cute squirrel girl becomes cuter
@NovaSquirrel Looks great!
@NovaSquirrel I'm liking this tbh